[Jiryuusei] Love is better than Baseball

The boys have cute faces.
Not sure why the artist made their eye colour match their hair. It draws the viewers eye to the faces but there's nothing else that boldly stands out in the picture.

The lines on the uniform seem harsh, like sketch lines. The uniforms could be more detailed and there's too much white of the uniform dominating the picture. Detail would add character to the picture, making the boys look more individual, even though they are embracing each other.

The spiky hair needs to have a smoother flow to it.
There's also no real definition to the boys form - it's kind of lost under the uniforms.